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I'm sorry but some of these segments are held WAY too long. Too many still images. Some action besides running would be nice. However, this does look compelling and I will watch the series when you develop the series. The artwork was great. You just need some more action in the intro.

sonicx666666 responds:

Your feedback is appreciated, and all I have to say is... Just wait until episode 1. ;)

This has good potential. I'm glad You had a trailer first for constructive critism. Your logo needs to look cooler Try Taking out that parallelogram, and adding effects to it. Your animation is decent, but I think if you work it a little more it would be great. The drawings need a little more time in drawing, Although it looks okay, it I believe you cn make it look better. The concept is interesting, I will be sure to watch this. The music is appropriate, but I think the quality of the sound needs to be either amplified, or in a better sound format for better quality.

89animegirl responds:

Thanks, and it means a lot. Dunno what to say about the pictures though, I draw them with a mouse, it's pretty frustrating. As for your other suggestions, I'll be sure to implement them.

At least finish the ball animating across the screen. Sound when it hits would help. So would a background. Also it would help if you didn't submit tests to newgrounds or pretty much all of your scores will be low, just so you know. Good luck animating (Trying not to troll)

DinoZ0R responds:

yeah thanks. this is just a test to see if I could actually upload stuff to newgrounds none of my animations will suck this bad. thanks for feedback.

Totally not "E" Rated. Funny though

ADASport responds:

We acknowledge this and will adjust for next time.

Good Job. I can't believe this was your first project! Excellent animating, you have a future in this. Improve your drawings and you'll get a good following. Good luck to you.

Animint responds:

Thanks!

Is this meant as a personal message?
Interesting and very sad :|

mrdragon87 responds:

yes , i has best friend in real world , he married with someone and i cant go there , that place is my enermy place ( something i cant go) . I feel very bad . This for him if he notice. ty for watching

Wait to publish material until you have mastered the basics of flash. You seem to have a decent work of actionscript, use that knowledge to build games. You could become a great animator one day, maybe.

octopus58 responds:

Wow thank you! And by the way I do know how to make a simple platformer (with a good animated character who can move jump duck etc.) but the problem is I don't know how to make characters shoot and how to make enemies move (in action script 2). I am trying to figure out

Tests don't belong on newgrrounds.

cuddlesthemighty responds:

Still a full animation with a punch line if you don't see that i'm sry for you loss. :P

Every day there are good people helping to make a better world. Sometimes it just needs a little help to make it get noticed. Mario rocks.
Great animation by the way, I still remember when I first back to the start and that was amazing. Keep up the good work.

jackbliss responds:

Thanks! Its so touching when people like you still remember that movie though it was made 7 years ago. You're absolutely right about so many good people helping to make it a better world. Its high time we help them get recognition so it would be easier for the them to continue their good work and inspires others too rather than focus what rich celebrities are doing lol.

Thanks so much for the review and the inspiration to keep going. Good luck to you :)

Needs sound and I would have given this a three. 3.5 if it were a bit longer. I like the concept of inanimate object movement . it's really ennjoyable. You are pretty good, I hope to see more from you.

taaki responds:

thank you so much. the reason it isnt any sound in it because this was animated for a Demoreel/Showreel and i gave each individual work less priority as a whole.

If you wonder, the whole showreel can be seen on my DA account.

http://zaraki08.deviantart.com/art/Showreel-2012-344842724

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