This has good potential. I'm glad You had a trailer first for constructive critism. Your logo needs to look cooler Try Taking out that parallelogram, and adding effects to it. Your animation is decent, but I think if you work it a little more it would be great. The drawings need a little more time in drawing, Although it looks okay, it I believe you cn make it look better. The concept is interesting, I will be sure to watch this. The music is appropriate, but I think the quality of the sound needs to be either amplified, or in a better sound format for better quality.